The following question is genuine, even if it does subtly hint that people ought to visit my blog ;).
Anyway, the title says it all. I’m having trouble achieving a median between shoving descriptive words and overlong sentences into my movie reviews and making them “cool”, hyperkinetic and punchy. Any tips?
The reason I want to ask this is because I don’t want to alienate people when they read my reviews.
(also, for an extra bonus point: have I missed anything out in my FAQ? Are any of the questions meandering or confusing? http://stupidhorrormovies.blogspot.com/2009/03/faq.html)
Thanks! - Zacery